Querying Requires Practice

The problem is that the first time you query agents, you haven't had any practice. You're dropped into the deep end and expected to figure out how to swim.

I've been through this process with my own work and with my clients. After landing my own agent (who's amazing, by the way), I continued studying the process and becoming an expert at crafting query letters that sell. Read about how I got my agent here.

Since, I have helped dozens of authors develop their queries and improve their request rates. I've refined my coaching process over the years, and the overwhelming response to my query coaching sessions, in particular, has been "Wow, I don't know how I could have done this without you."

Query Coaching

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Query coaching is the most effective and efficient way to develop and strengthen your query. During a live Zoom session, we will rewrite your query, combining my querying experience with your personal knowledge of your story. This is the strongest option for writers who are committed to landing an agent.

My approach to coaching is much like my editing approach: tough but encouraging. I am honest about what needs work and areas that may become issues. But I recognize that your story means more to you than a stranger can see. During the querying process, the craft of writing meets the business. As a coach, I work to address both sides.

Includes:

• Preliminary query critique
• One-hour Zoom session
• Follow-up notes on revisions

Query Critique

A query critique involves focused feedback on your query. This is the best option if you're on a budget or if you're certain your query already contains all of the necessary elements and only needs changes to the way they are presented.

As with all of my query services, the emphasis is on developing a query that sells while remaining true to the story.

Includes:

• Query critique with notes and edits
• Follow-up notes on revisions

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Victoria improved my query package tremendously. Not only is my query letter a better marketing tool, but my synopsis!--I never expected a synopsis could be something which could make readers excited about the overall story, but Victoria's questions and advice turned the synopsis from something lifeless into an exciting document in its own right. Her comments on my pages were specific enough to provide direction, and broad enough to give me a new eye toward general improvements.

Victoria was prompt and professional. She was also careful to phrase critiques delicately, with an eye to suggesting improvements without being harsh.

I am so pleased I hired Victoria!

Debbie RomaniMendocino Music

To any author who is considering getting their query read and revised but isn't quite sure, please do it. The feedback I received on both my query letter and sample pages was extremely helpful and pointed out things I had hardly considered. My query letter is completely unrecognizable in the best way possible. Victoria was also very easy to reach out to and approachable. I had no worries about emailing or communicating with her at all.

In summary: She's experienced, easy to work with, and very good at what she does. It's worth every penny and I highly recommend her services, because I don't think I would have made as much progress in my querying process without her.

Grace PapasMonsters Underneath

As a new writer, I found myself drowning in a sea of information I found on the internet regarding querying, first ten pages, synopsis, and such. Blue Pen Editing tossed me a line, showed me how to swim, and pointed me toward the shore.

Their services have been positive and professional. My manuscript has taken a giant leap forward, as well as my belief in my abilities. If you are like me and serious about reaching your publishing goals, I would highly recommend this service.

John HearonI Wasn't Always a Hero

I was at a point in my querying journey that required professional direction. I didn't know what to improve and felt stuck. Victoria immediately reassured me and gave me hope to find and fix the problems.

I am so glad I took that first step to inquire about services with Blue Pen. I was uncertain how to proceed with improving my writing and querying and once I had that first conversation, I immediately felt at ease. A writing career is important enough to seek and secure professional help in order to keep moving forward. I only wish I had sought the services of Victoria Griffin much earlier!

Sharon BlevinsThe Final Deal and Beyond the Crossing

Book Your Query Services:

1. Select the services you need on the form.
2. Upload your materials and submit the form.
3. Victoria will complete your services and return the edits to you by email.

If you book a query coaching session, you will be prompted to schedule your session after completing the form.
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Current turnaround time for most query services: 2–3 weeks

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